Thematic Focus: Using a natural or domestic image to explore a divine or abstract idea.
Forms: Sonnets (specifically alternating between tetrameter and trimeter)
Inspiration: Emily Dickinson, Christina Rossetti, Gerard Manley Hopkins, George Herbert
Original Works:
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Sunday, March 19, 2017
Monday, March 13, 2017
2nd Quarter
Thematic Focus: Romantic Love and Loss
Forms: Villanelles, Spenserian Stanza, Sestina
Inspiration: Elizabeth Bishop: "One Art", Percy Bysshe Shelley: "Adonais", John Milton: "Lycidas", etc.
Original Works:
I took the ending lines of Adonias, a Sestina, and formed by own stanza using them:
Forms: Villanelles, Spenserian Stanza, Sestina
Inspiration: Elizabeth Bishop: "One Art", Percy Bysshe Shelley: "Adonais", John Milton: "Lycidas", etc.
Original Works:
I took the ending lines of Adonias, a Sestina, and formed by own stanza using them:
A sweet scent brings him molded into thought.
He hums a tune that makes me smile—sweet sound
Like sizzles on a pan that morning sought.
With his sweatshirt on and my hair unbound
Did the church we had built burn to the ground.
The ashes of our love, which kindled day,
Lays lifeless while his laugh like thunder moans
In dreams as an unquiet slumber lay
On autumn leaves sobbing in their dismay.
I drew inspiration for my next original poem by creating a few lines with a blackout poem of Lycidas:
I then wrote my own Villanelle:
A Slice of Me and You
It smells like charring strings and your perfume—
A medley of roses and rusting chime,
As we slow dance inside this burning room.
The string quartet is screaming our life tune,
Like our first fight or maybe my first lie.
So I smell the charred strings and your perfume.
All the guests want a slice of me and you.
They are getting hungry (quick, pour the wine!)
So they’ll sway with the flames in the ballroom.
You were all I could see that afternoon,
Melting white lace begging to be untied.
It reeked of roses and a sweating groom.
I can’t seem to hold you like I want to
and sweaty palms keep you from being mine.
I cling to our dance in the burning room.
You made love you, want you—I do—so true.
With your eyes on mine, our hands intertwined.
But it smells like charring strings and perfume.
Dear, we’re slow dancing in a burning room.
1st Quarter
Thematic Focus: The fall of Adam and Eve from the garden of Eden
Forms: English and Petrarchan Sonnets
Inspiration: John Keats, John Milton: "Paradise Lost", Donald Justice: "The Wall", Gerald Stern: "The Expulsion", etc
Original work:
I wrote three sonnets from the first person perspective of Eve, which proved to be a strikingly personal way to throw myself deep into the narrative. The first sonnet is set in the form of an English sonnet, as Eve begins to realize flaws in the perfection of Eden. The second sonnet is a Petrarchan sonnet that shows Eve succumbing to her own temptations and convincing Adam to follow her to where they can both pursue their earthy desires to sin. The third sonnet, set on earth and without rhyme scheme, is about the trying experiences of human life where Eve, now surrounded by the pain in the world, is ultimately drawn back to the beauty of The Garden. I intentionally wrote the set in iambic pentameter and paid close attention to melodic devices in order to translate the project into music, so I could portray the sonnets through the artistic representation of dance. The accumulative project became something that was entirely my own; my idea, my writing, my voice, my choreography, my dancing.
Forms: English and Petrarchan Sonnets
Inspiration: John Keats, John Milton: "Paradise Lost", Donald Justice: "The Wall", Gerald Stern: "The Expulsion", etc
Original work:
I wrote three sonnets from the first person perspective of Eve, which proved to be a strikingly personal way to throw myself deep into the narrative. The first sonnet is set in the form of an English sonnet, as Eve begins to realize flaws in the perfection of Eden. The second sonnet is a Petrarchan sonnet that shows Eve succumbing to her own temptations and convincing Adam to follow her to where they can both pursue their earthy desires to sin. The third sonnet, set on earth and without rhyme scheme, is about the trying experiences of human life where Eve, now surrounded by the pain in the world, is ultimately drawn back to the beauty of The Garden. I intentionally wrote the set in iambic pentameter and paid close attention to melodic devices in order to translate the project into music, so I could portray the sonnets through the artistic representation of dance. The accumulative project became something that was entirely my own; my idea, my writing, my voice, my choreography, my dancing.
Sleeping
At Last
Painted
portrait skies sigh breaths of relief,
Tainting
humming trees with melting sun kissed
Breeze,
that sounds sweeping praises of belief.
The
landscape doesn’t know what they have missed.
The fulfillment
this place offers your soul,
Is
like rain on hot days, fills hands you cup,
Rinsing
stains, can’t make you whole.
Adam,
it is the time that you give up.
The
birds, they’re ringing rounds of singing sounds
of
wake up! But I have been told of
The
treasures sleep can hold from its dark hounds;
You
cannot see the truth while we’re above.
Landscapes
dance the tune that plays within them,
But
singing just one song is to condemn.
The morning
call brings in the sweeping sound,
Of
angels and their wings, like rising sun.
The
guardians give no consent to run
To
indulgent orchids, sins burial ground.
Ripe
rounds of tangy red are crisply bound;
Too
sweet the taste to stop once you’ve begun,
Adam,
they’re nothing that you’ve know, try one;
Inside
you is a hunger to be found.
With
each bite, can you feel our chains are freed,
Which
held our wills confined behind this door.
This
goodness here will follow us— eat fast;
What
is outside can satisfy all needs.
Hold
my hand, we’ll fall to a place with more.
A
surrender so sweet, sleeping at last.
We
are walking on worn shoes and blistered feet,
Stumbling
down dark paths, arms stretched out in front,
Braced,
as we’re dragged around each corner,
Like
puppets pulled by relentless passions.
But
the red we have craved is hidden here
In
the darkness, where our demons can play
Within
the winding tunnels of our souls;
A
war that drills holes in my guilty heart.
But
in the dark I can see shining stars,
Like
windows of heaven, my eyes wide in
Mystify,
the shine of God’s love seems like
Such
amazing wonder—like coming home.
Failings
of human life guide me and you
Back
to the garden where our souls first grew.
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